5.06.2007

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7 comments:

Nitin SJ Narayanan said...

Dude! You Rock in Fiction...needless to say...I think those big books you read years ago have proven something for sure...they can surely make someone a good writer...



Go write a book, man!

Sidhusaaheb said...

Well written piece!

Macabreday said...

haa..well written....and right frm somewhere in da middle..i was curious abt the ending.... nice..and how else would u have eneded it?

The Blue Indian said...

You can call this semi-fiction coz something similar to this actually happens across the border..we know where.. but all said and done.. what you described cannot be an excuse to kill innocent people dude. Terrorsim can never be justified even if there is some kinda reson behind it.

The Smokin' WDM2 said...

@Nitin: My thanx... sure, will consider ur suggstion :)

@Sidhusaaheb, Divyan: Thanx guys

@Blue-man: I am not making an excuse for killing innocent ppl.. this is just a work of art, and if u're referring to the line before the last(This wasn't selfishness... it was selfless love), well, it is right in his context, or his way of thinking. Well, perhaps this link could provide a better insight as to what I think of terrorists: http://anotherbloggerbloke.blogspot.com/2006/08/this-is-for-you-bastards-you_12.html

DAMN... I like this story less and less now... after reading this once or twice over.

Sneha said...

Hey SP, smooth. It reminded my of Fiza, the movie, the part where Aman shoots the politician, of course the motive was very different :D
Nice work. Keep writing!

Urgu said...

Dude this is awesome. The ending is fking poetic. Click.

SHIT!! beautiful.